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My Reflective Poem

Posted by Youth?? on 2007-01-12 21:31:28, Friday

This is a poem i have been writing over the past week, and im done with it. Yes, i did write it. Enjoy. Give me some feedback, questions, statements, etc.

*A Mistake*
by: Youth??

The day will come, when you and I will take a minute to
discuss what i have done and what i didn't
(no comming back)
It is the day that I long for, and yet the day I so strongly run from
(what is fear?)
And I don't care if my words seem real, but they are the only real thing that i've got left to feel.
(Hiding the truth)

Just Lost, forgotten and alone, im forgotten and alone, just forgotten and alone.
(Look up, into the stars there is one there for you)

Where do I go from here?
I can't make it through this one more year!
I know the traps, and you've shown me,
(and im the fool, who just couldn't see)

But I love you, and its a mistake, a mistake, and its as much as I can take!
Being torn from you, fills me with hate, and I can't go, and I won't go.

But I love you, and its a mistake, a mistake, and its as much as I can take!
Being torn from you, fills me with hate, and I can't go, and I won't go.
Im sorry for the way I held you in so tight, but I worry for you all through the night.

So give me a change, give me the way, and I'll Come back, and I'll come back for you.

I have forgotten, what its like to forget, and i'll be honest,
I don't like it when it hits me strait on,
And in my dream, I swore that you.... where gone
Only.... to wake up in your arms

Just Lost, forgotten and alone, im forgotten and alone, just forgotten and alone.
(I think its all becoming clear)

Where do I go from here?
I can't make it through this one more year!
I know the traps, and you've shown me,
(and im the fool, who just couldn't see)

But I love you, and its a mistake, a mistake, and its as much as I can take!
Being torn from you, fills me with hate, and I can't go, and I won't go.

But I love you, and its a mistake, a mistake, and its as much as I can take!
Being torn from you, fills me with hate, and I can't go, and I won't go.
Im sorry for the way I held you in so tight, but I worry for you all through the night.

So give me a change, give me the way, and I'll Come back, and I'll come back for you.

And I am not afraid, to speak up when im in pain; I need you here: NOW!

I hear the echos, now i have something; to die for
I hear the echos, now i have something; to die for
I've heard the echos, now i know! I've got somethinh to love for!

And as the rain, falls onto the ground, i know I keep screaming it, but i need you now;

I am down on, my two knees;
I need you here now, please...

Because I love you.... and its a mistake, Its a mistake, just another mistake, and I love you, but it just a mistake.

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